Here are the mission statement drafts for FOR Schools:
1) FOR Schools is a community based group dedicated to the promotion of quality education through collaboration and communication with all involved stakeholders of RDJUSD.
2) FOR Schools is a group of community supporters dedicated to the overall improvement and promotion of quality education in our local schools.
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3 comments:
Looking at both, I'm leaning towards option #1. No changes requested.
I prefer option #2 "members" replacing "supporters". The word stakeholders conjures up vampires for me and imo is an overused buzz word but if another word could be found to replace it, I could like #1.
I like option #2, it's straight forward, to the point and easy for anyone to relate to and understand.
Thanks! Julie
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